How you getting along with it Scorpio? Anyone come up with anything for 'the web'? I would jump in myself but not much of a relay with just one person! Lol! Our creative juices should be flowing with spring in full bloom and summer upon us! It doesn't have to be anything huge justa coppola lines, and it can be any take on 'the web', not necessarily a spiders one!
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the shadow is the greatest teacher for showing us how to come to the light ram dass
Hmmmm, going to be tricky, I will see what I can come up with, brain dead at the moment..., too much on my mind, I use to be able to come up with some NICe poems , I will just have to get back into the swing of it
By my sick bed you sit, all suit and eyes, Trying too hard to control and be wise, The pity and fear in your thoughts are too loud, Filling me up with a heavy dark cloud, I glimpse your jacket's silver lining, (unlike you, I can feel it shining), Your parting advice; 'just keep being brave'... As once more I'm alone in my darkened cave, I slip out of your mind as you travel afar, And sigh off in your breathy car, Though your echo remains like a wave that burns, I focus my mind on the wheel that turns, Peeling off layers of pain from my heart, Falling in light until I am part, And I wonder, who IS ill, you or me, For you strangled your soul, while mine is free.
lula
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-- Edited by lula at 13:05, 2008-04-23
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the shadow is the greatest teacher for showing us how to come to the light ram dass
this sounds like a great game Kolecta, you're always so good at instigating stuff! the problem i'm personally having is I can't decide to just write a poem it has to write me! It just comes like a flood or volcano from some source.. Some force.. ! So since you set the topic, i've only been able to engage with it in my brain and mind and consequently the creativity is just not flowing! Sorry! However..the seed has been planted and who knows what will grow there.. I'll be sure to post it when it does. In the meantime maybe someone else will have more joy! I think perhaps for me this subject matter might take me to some dark places..
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the shadow is the greatest teacher for showing us how to come to the light ram dass
This can be played as a game. The previous person sets you a topic and then you write a poem about it then you set the topic for the next person to have a go at. We keep going and see how long we can make it last.
It doesn't have to be anything huge justa coppola lines, and it can be any take on 'the web', not necessarily a spiders one!
, too much on my mind, I use to be able to come up with some NICe poems , I will just have to get back into the swing of it
