Great one Bec,, how on earth did you come up with that one on the quick?? I like that one, sort of reminds me of the Season of the witch, with Nic as the knight
It's great bec, it's hard to do poems at times, and being that you are only 13 as well that's a good acheivement I use to be able to do them, maybe once my mind isn't in such a muddle...lol, i will get back into the swing of doing them again.
My mum forced me to post this.. I guess it's just a random poem *hides* which is my homework. It's meant to be dark and mysterious, but.. Not so sure.. So here it is.. (kinda cheesy!)
He watched her from the falling dark Feeling the chill of his un-beating heart She looked away, straight into his eye Hearing her conscious - she began to cry
He walked toward her His legs a-quiver Her arched back, began to shiver He raised his hand, straight to her cheek As he did this he began to speak
" Listen here, my darling grand, I'll be thee glove upon thy hand You'll be here from dusk till sunrise Only a while, so wipe thy eyes.."
*hides* Tis horrible!!
-- Edited by NKOTBfan at 17:16, 2009-01-12
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I use to be able to do them, maybe once my mind isn't in such a muddle...lol, i will get back into the swing of doing them again.
